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Yeppers, I drew Nikki <3 I don't know what she's looking at, but she's looking at something xD lol ^^


art and character (c) Me C:
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Pros:
Dude, I freaking love this background so much! You actually did one instead of what most people do, which is drawing a bunch of thick lines and smearing them and then doing the same with grass. I can tell that you were actually trying to make it serious and quality like that.
I love the shadddinnnng <3
Colors are amazing c':
Your anatomy's pretty good, fluff is good, all that stuff. You're better then me for darned sure.
There are so many more but I'm not just going to go on and on with how good it is, because you get the point. (It really is good though!)
Cons:
There really aren't many of these and the ones there are are barely noticeable and just me looking for something to point out so the critique is slightly even. After all, what's the point of critiquing if you're just gonna say it's good and keep up the good work? You could just comment if you want to say that. So here are my two teeny tiny cons.
The first one is the crescent moons. I love moons, especially crescents. They add personality and charm to a drawing. But sometimes when people draw them, the edges are rough. I usually draw them more circular and put a lot of glow around the edges and put a lot of faded light around it.
This isn't really a con, since it's not important, barely noticeable, was probably a mistake and actually doesn't matter. But I have to remember balance, so I'm going to point out that the left ear is pointier and longer than the other. I suck at making ears and symmetrical things even. But that right ear is like, bam, right on the nose.

Well, that's my critique. I really love this drawing, it's an instafav. Keep up the good work!!